FEEDBACK

Points that came up during the group crit...

- My partner had a good understanding of what had been done and why. Without me explaining it to her, she was able to piece together this whole idea of it being about nature and natural pattern due to her sense of style, appearance and the answers to the questions that the original influences came from. The urban v.s nature aspect was also picked up on.

- Close up, everyone was intrigued by the detail, however once up on the wall, it became apparent that from a distance it wasn't as legible. This could easily be solved by going round the letters in a thicker pen, just to make the shapes stand out a bit more from the pattern.

- It was suggested that the pattern could perhaps come out from the letterform and could become part of the background.

- The name tag worked well when close up, similar to the main alphabet, however became a bit confused when far away. This could easily be solved by using a thicker pen to go round the letters in.