Monday, 6 February 2012

FINAL CRIT FEEDBACK

Design Direction

Strengths:
- merchandise for a circus
- can tell it's relevant to the theme

Weaknesses:
- maybe more variation of products

Design Development

Strengths:
- consistent colour theme, all relate as a series
- brand aesthetics

Weaknesses:
- would it attract a broad TMG or just females? pastels etc

Visual Quality

Strengths:
- fun facts related to the attitude of the circus

Weaknesses:
- quite a few different typefaces, do they work together?

Technical Competence

Strengths:
- clean design, all looks like it's meant to
- clear manipulation of type on flags

Weaknesses:
- could consider making the white strokes around images smaller

Additional Comments
- good overall appealing design
- considered mix of colours

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